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151515

I am Li Man Him.I am a F.1 student.I live in Tai Po.I am twelve years old.I study in a band 1 secondary school.My father is a cook,my mother was died last year and my young brother is a primary school's student.
  I like playing Chinese chess very much.I always play it with my classmates.I like playing it because it is interesting.I like playing computer games too.It's because I think it is exciting.But I like talk to my friend best.It is because I can make more happy when I talk to my friend.
  I study in a E.M.I. and I am in the top class(F.1E).I am not clever and not very hard-working so I am the last in my class.But in F.1,I am not the last.My English teacher is a Englishman.I usually do not know what do he say in English lesson.I need to see him every day.,My maths teacher Mr Ngan's 'Ngan''s sounds like 'Ant' so we call him Mr Ant.He is cute.
  I like reading history books very much,it's because I can learn some in history books,are you agree read history books can learn something?
  I just want to have a exercise so I write this homepage.If you see there are mistakes,please call me,thank you.
　After you read this,can you teach me how to 改善,please.

[ Last edited by 151515 on 2005-11-23 at 06:53 PM ]

yu815

r u on crack??

國寶

我是李供以人員他。我是F.1 學生。我住在Tai Po 。我十二歲。我學習在帶1 中學。我的父親是廚夫,我的母親去年死了並且我的弟弟是一名小學的學生。
  我喜歡非常下中國棋。我總演奏它與我的同學。我喜歡演奏它因為它是有趣。我喜歡演奏電腦遊戲也是。它是因為我認為它是扣人心弦。但我喜歡談話對我的朋友最好。它是因為我能使更加愉快當我與我的朋友談話。
  我學習在E 。M 。I. 並且我是在名列前茅class(F.1E) 。我不聰明和不非常勤勉因此我是為時在我的類。但在F.1,我不是持續。我的英語老師是英國人。我通常不知道什麼他說在英國教訓。我需要看他每天,我的數學老師Ngan 先生的' Ngan' 的聲音像' 螞蟻' 如此我們告訴他Ant 先生。他是逗人喜愛的。
  我非常喜歡讀書史書,它是因為我能學會一些在史書裡,您是同意讀了史書可以學會某事嗎?
  我想要有鍛煉因此我寫這主頁。如果您看見有差錯,請告訴我,謝謝。
.@After 您讀了這,能您教我怎麼對.改善請。

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