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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, i& U8 T) Q- r# Z
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 m, |( y$ `* }- F; peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 D) T) G& I5 J8 K; G! x9 D) L$ J/ _3 r+ Q, e" ^* c, D- Q! t" v& j
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It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# o4 p( x; |$ r. K7 s0 Q. s& ?
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 H" L) f5 o) |% u
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow./ e) @# z) ~! W; ^) f
4 F; O: S2 x. ?8 c& c; jThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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