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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 }1 M8 C' N8 q
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 T1 I8 `* |! `% G8 Reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ i) e1 d4 T2 Y" r$ K( n+ b* v6 x
Let me just rewrite yours:1 V4 p( f! E, e# ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me9 `: R; V, R K; f( i0 ]! z
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 |2 E4 ?2 B O$ X' [8 N& b- p2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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' ]7 l, l4 p3 U+ G8 f1 `' o/ QThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: j% s: C* B" m: \# I( B
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