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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...
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Love is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
3 b0 u7 A/ F) N/ |9 {let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
9 f& b& w$ A; @' i原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶+ D1 }0 N7 Y$ G
6 Q3 U% U" w: v$ gSry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
0 r' ~" b; {8 ?8 U* q8 BAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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