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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...
$ O3 E+ d1 S) b* T/ N5 E! \一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.
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Love is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
1 N, a6 T+ z6 y# Nlet me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
) l8 C& A. Y% X' l/ t5 z原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..+ Q" A/ y3 T* B7 m# {8 r* C* ~! m
Anyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?/ f5 T! ]# S9 Y, `' q/ s. _
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