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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...
1 ^; Q0 r) n5 F, @( d一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.
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/ X2 U0 @- n/ s3 z! {Love is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
$ Q! |5 a% G' D* {: _let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one' h2 ]. T" D, c
原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
5 L4 a; l+ S! RAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?* Q) g! h7 w9 r+ v, _. H% U& u
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