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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...
1 O$ v5 n$ @9 V4 W% j+ ^ X$ x一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶. j2 y6 F" v6 H: n, p
. Y7 C/ H3 v7 Y; B9 W! I( V9 RLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
# V9 @, k2 Y% alet me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
, W) J6 ^/ C n& V# v/ g* F原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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1 m8 Q6 J/ }" C; q6 MSry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
+ c- B/ S& {, f0 H9 o. _0 QAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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