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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...; g2 Q7 K$ R3 G" e
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.
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Love is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
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原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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1 i% v; u+ V9 j! @1 t2 k1 G8 I8 nSry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
' M( l! u [: i( t, c, A! GAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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