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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor..., H* v+ s; ^3 L- P/ k# H
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.* H* a% Q E7 c' ?8 M
' x9 y3 l, j1 y: `& {6 ILove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.' U& Y0 N M7 e; `
let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
1 U# a! n, m% ^: R( e& C& {原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶# R( F& z$ |2 {) _" U
4 {0 W* R2 X! @: e: m8 KSry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..: d9 Q% R0 \. q+ t( P# r. f
Anyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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