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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...: Z- H6 p* I0 J. t* `% ^
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.
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+ ?* i, k% _& K: a5 `Love is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.0 B& a4 o v& m; @) o
let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one/ [& I; a1 k% C7 p5 K* G
原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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( P2 u- g# S3 L* HSry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
: g" u% p4 D- z K7 o! L. dAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?: ` n3 k, C6 s [( c+ b
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