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原帖由 Kev 於 2009-7-5 01:22 AM 發表 http://www.26fun.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif" O8 [, }% p; ?4 g; f8 r
your version is the best one.. i just couldnt think of any way to translate his sentences to english, it's like chinglish."there will be a surprise for you before we leave, you'll know what it is when ...

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: S: o; w9 N4 `6 Z2 u: X+ j"原帖由 ngakai78 於 2009-7-4 11:13 PM 發表 http://www.26fun.com/bbs/images/common/back.gifI think it'll be better if you leave you "gift".1) I have got a surprise for you before we head back to Hong Kong.  You'll know when you get it.or2) Before we head back to Hong Kong, I want to g ... "! e5 d$ j$ p* q, q

9 ]' x1 O1 G! ?8 w9 MAny thing that declared to be "surprise" can hardly be "surprise".  Meanwhile, simply "I have got a surprise" for you may mean anything (from eating one shxt to giving a gift that cost you a fortune)..anyway, maybe that's what you mean.

ivan911

原帖由 大優勢 於 2009-7-4 06:07 PM 發表 http://www.26fun.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif/ j& k' K! b' V
唔識呀
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同 '' 當你收到時你就會知道'''$ \$ @, E: I6 q- g; P+ i/ N- a/ F! ~
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變英文 應該點寫呢
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請幫手

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' w9 ]4 k' g3 m$ d$ oJust for your reference surprise gift? # F& f* i) I" |0 B" s

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"I will give you a surprise gift before we come back to Hong Kong."
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  o" E- l3 F4 T8 F  y "You will know what it is when you receive it."

iamanpan

我連中文問題都吾知佢想問咩。其實係吾係你宜加係外國，你返香港之前會係外國比份gift 佢？0 b# I' ]- E6 }% E0 D5 ]- u+ g; P# @% V

( Z. l$ O* J; X+ S! }9 u. iI will have a gift for you, before I back to HK. When you get it you will know what it is.

大優勢

  多謝各位幫我1 s% T3 r; l' r1 L; o7 E
我作好 文了
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d228216

原帖由 大優勢 於 2009-7-4 07:00 PM 發表 http://www.26fun.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif# i/ ]/ w# W* V+ q* f8 {0 m# P, U( I
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. V4 m. i5 j4 V4 tthen you are 「milked」!  It should be "
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/ r% D" C) l4 ]# lI will give you the Surpise Gift before I go back Hong Kong, You will know when you get it...

大優勢

milked ??????????  what did you mean ?????

d228216

原帖由 大優勢 於 2009-7-6 12:47 AM 發表 http://www.26fun.com/bbs/images/common/back.gif
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skp1

i would translate it as:
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using "you'll know" doesn't seem very meaningful to me... the person you are speaking to probably knows about it already when you tell her beforehand, haha. v# J. H; x$ v" o8 d9 L; o
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just a suggestion

ngakai78

Any thing that declared to be "surprise" can hardly be "surprise".  Meanwhile, simply "I have got a surprise" for you may mean anything (from eating one shxt to giving a gift that cost you a fortune)..anyway, maybe that's what you mean.

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1 S) v, c! g" }8 K3 ~That is what I mean.  The "surprise" stems from the fact the recipient doesn't know what the "surprise" actually is.  This sentence tell the listener that something will be given to him and it would be something he'd least expected .  If the parties involved in this dialogue are friends, it is implied that the "surprise" would be a positive thing and not something that would require one to eat shxt.
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ngakai78

Any thing that declared to be "surprise" can hardly be"surprise". Meanwhile, simply "I have got a surprise" for you may meananything (from eating one shxt to giving a gift that cost you afortune)..anyway, maybe that's what you mean.

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That is what I mean.  The "surprise" stems from the fact the recipientdoesn't know what the "surprise" actually is.  This sentence tell thelistener that something will be given to him and it would be somethinghe'd least expected .  If the parties involved in this dialogue arefriends, it is implied that the "surprise" would be a positive thingand not something that would require one to eat shxt.