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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor..." |" u6 h6 u3 _9 D
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.. J6 C' j8 _6 O! v/ L0 @8 U
( t# t* M1 K- x! XLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
; j7 r9 n0 z' @( Z; Xlet me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
E) ^3 E2 d' Z原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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5 j+ V0 y' k8 }+ Z" y# i5 e. mSry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
, s( O0 j8 r7 \% E0 NAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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