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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...( ~' o- e# }: n8 H) z
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.
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let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one, q7 j2 K- ~5 x! I
原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶2 g4 J& ?0 A/ h
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
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