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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...' M: h; K1 T. d$ y" P$ z
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.9 |1 b. D V/ `$ l6 }+ ]7 w% }
% T; |; w& k1 W8 m% \. I) fLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
7 n) q" v5 P; @* E5 ^let me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
0 Y: b4 z1 h$ v# t. c+ ?! E. @原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
7 [/ j6 R$ ~3 l, s( w/ gAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?3 D# b) a+ b% a* t
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