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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...
) U1 D+ [; g1 }' X; i2 Z& o一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.
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6 W' A) p8 n8 G9 I/ S' QLove is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
, q; I- \6 P T9 Dlet me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one+ }- A/ t) w/ W: `9 g) h+ g
原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
( }5 M0 U; U6 G7 s$ W- z+ G6 O% ]7 L% GAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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