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發表於 2007-5-11 03:28 AM
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hmm ur chinese ..... are ...pretty bad wor...! X- k$ S" F4 `+ Z- }& u
一塊貴寶,是傳說當中的一對男女之間,因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶.9 M2 @6 t. O" y% n! s
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Love is intangible and even if you are using metaphor, you shouldn't put in this way.,.
; P. d( b3 E5 \! N: Dlet me copy and paste ur sentences into a more comprehensible one
$ v8 H5 A" R/ j/ l6 n原來墨爾本的翡翠不是一塊翡翠,而是傳說中,一對男女因為彼此深厚的愛情而結下的一塊貴寶) M p$ w" e0 N) G7 W' q. F' Z
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Sry. I can only copy and paste... so.. i have limited ability to rearrange your sentence..
6 Z, v6 r/ l# p: ?6 t" P1 WAnyhow, what is 貴寶 exactly means?
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